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Post by Morgan Freeman on Aug 3, 2013 20:00:17 GMT -5
Ultima CosmeticsHair Shampoo**Attention Judges, bad quality is my fault - Fyora**Hello lovely judges, allow me to introduce "Squeaky Peachy" the shampoo that cleans every inch of your hair and leaves your scalp and that luscious hair of yours feeling silky smooth and smelling peachy fresh! (Hot girl in advertisement not included) FoundationThis photo has so many beauty elements that it could sell a range of products however I have chosen to use this photo for foundation product called "Simply Peach." Let your skin radiate and smell of fresh flower petals from using some Simply Peach! (Hot girl in the advertisement not included)
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Post by All-Class on Aug 7, 2013 5:37:21 GMT -5
Both of these posters have the appeal of being fresh and clean, even though the first is of poor picture quality you still look fresh and vibrant and your hair looks beautiful. It is very clear what you are advertising and the tagline is cute. Your second poster shows you fresh faced and vibrant and because it is a profile shot it is absolutely suitable as a foundation advertisement. Again the tagline is very cute
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Aug 9, 2013 7:04:42 GMT -5
{Peach, you stink. Get out.}I'm sorry I messed up the quality in your shampoo advertisement. I have no idea how I did it! Maybe I saved it wrong!
But I digress. I'm on the fence with it. I wish it were more in front of you. Over your shoulder, you know. The hair really needs to be the spotlight here, and not you.
However, I love your foundation. It's radiant, and it's really beautiful. So good job there!
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Post by Hikaru Utada on Aug 10, 2013 1:20:33 GMT -5
The hair on the first shot is definitely looking very nice a clean. Great product display on a product that isn't the easiest to show off. It's a bit unfortunate that the quality isn't up to par. I like the movement of your arm and it's motion with your hair, but wish the shot didn't crop out that part.
Your second shot shows off your skin really well. It's a really nice profile shot of you. The eye we can see is very pretty here, too. I think your first shot had a better concept, while the second shot was better in terms of actual quality.
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