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Post by Team MAY on Dec 21, 2013 2:17:56 GMT -5
Grrr...
I'm late again. Don't have much options. Between Greed & Envy only. I picked Greed.
The story behind this photo is a little bit funny. At least that's how I can relate it to Greed. Shailene check-in to a hotel with her friends. Apparently one bed isn't enough for Shailene so she wants to have two beds for herself. And the color of her outfit (Muddy Forest Green) symbolize the Greedy in Shailene. Weird concept but that's it...
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Dec 25, 2013 4:16:08 GMT -5
I'm not sure you've sold this very well. It just seems a bit of a mess to me. I think perhaps the best way for you to have approached this photoshoot was to perhaps include more yellow or gold, or perhaps to focus on a more material, monetary or extravagant way.
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Post by Morgan Freeman on Dec 25, 2013 19:08:45 GMT -5
I'm glad you have attempted to give us a bit of a back story into how this photo reflects greed or else I would have been at a loss. I can see now how Shailene is being greedy elongating herself across two beds, but even with a fitting description the photo is lacking theme connection. The photo needs to be able to speak for itself with a complimentary commentary by the model, but this photo doesn't say greed to me in itself. I see potential lust, seduction as well as confusion. The effort is noted but the overall execution of the photo isn't hitting the mark for me.
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Post by Hikaru Utada on Dec 26, 2013 2:16:41 GMT -5
I appreciate your story and it does help sell your theme. Your theme isn't the strongest, but you've at least sold it. I could see this a bit better as lust, though. I would have liked a larger photo of you, though. I love the fashion here and there's some modeling going on, but you're a bit too small and with the proportions of the photo, a larger one would have helped us see you better.
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