Post by Janice Dickinson on Oct 13, 2013 23:28:13 GMT -5
Sorry about the wait, but I have results! I HAVE RESULTS!
Brazilian Wizards:
Adriana:
Rodrigo:
Ginny:
Brazilian Wizards:
Adriana:
Rodrigo:
Ginny:
C. Viper: Adriana, I love this as a fragrance ad. It's so hard to sell a product that has no visual effects, but this shot really sets a scene and gives us a good idea what your product would smell like. I'm liking the lines you create here and the outfit is pretty strong, too. Good work.
Rodrigo, you didn't do too well the first time a shot from this shoot was used, so it's very risky to do again. The body jewelry is definitely very prominent and the pose is actually a pretty strong one. I'm just left a little bored with it.
Ginny, we're definitely back on the positive side here. Your hair is beautiful and a definite focus of the ad. You still manages to keep the rest of your face beautiful here, too. Probably my favorite of the three. Great work.
Janice: First of all, thank you for the perfume bottle. You're definitely playing to your strengths here with your sexy modelling. The play on the name of the perfume with the revealing nature on of your posing and fashion is great. I think it works very well as a fragrance advertisement.
Rodrigo, no... I did offer a hint - Tie. You have pictures in ties, I was accepting them. This is a real big let down. There's a lot of accessories, and they're everywhere. I actually do not like this.
Ginny, I wish you specified what product this was for. I'm presuming this is for a shampoo or conditioner? It's a great profile shot, and the hair looks amazing.
Morgan: Damn girl! Is there anyway you can reveal more of that beauty? I would appreciate that. You look completely immersed in the sensual vibe thats happening and your body looks divine. I especially like you showing off your long neck. Your arms are the down point for me here, one arm is absent and the other looks disfigured and incredibly short.
Rodrigo I don't mind this shot, its definitely missing the original and dazzling vibe that your other photos are showcasing but I can't deny that you are accessorising to the max! Maybe its my own bias and facination with the character Xerses which wins me over for this shot, all I know is that you look strong and proud and potentially a poster model for diverse genders/sexualities.
Ginny you look very innocent and fresh here, I love the accentuation of your facial characteristics and the natural appearance of your hair. Some specification as Janice mentioned of your exact product would have helped to sell your photo. Overall a beautiful artistic and modelling shot.
Legally Blonde:
Agyness:
Tilda:
Haruka:
Agyness:
Tilda:
Haruka:
Janice: Lucky you to have an actual fragrance ad. I can't say it doesn't work at all, because it does. Very well. Make up and styling are great, so it works pretty well.
As for Tilda, I don't think this is the right time to take a risk like this, it will either flop or shine. This case for me, it's a flop. . You and I both know that there were plenty of other ones that were safer alternatives that were absolutely stunning. I can't help but feel very let down by this for an accessory advertisement.
However, Haruka really shines here as much as her hair. Her hair looks full of life and body, and not unhealthy in the slightest bit. Which is amazing when you couple it with your implication that it's bleached. Bleached hair can be very damaged, like straw. That's why I'm not bleaching my hair again. But if I do, I am definitely sold on your shampoo/conditioner.
C. Viper: From first appearance Agyness's photo looks familiar to me and then I realise that this photo looks like an advertisement for a pop TV show with a Agyness portraying a semi-alternative teenage girl. Although you look well styled, this photo is too safe and elementary for me. Some more sophistication and perhaps a wider shot where I could see some more of your posing would make this more effective for me.
Tilda, I appreciate the risk but this has not won me over. There are too many concerning elements in this photo for me to enjoy the overall execution. Your hair looks like a extremely conservative 50 year old mans hairstyle and from your shoulders upwards it looks like you have also stole a 50 year old's body characteristics. With a more modelesque execution the robotic mouth may have worked, but in its current form it appears messy. Fashion wise great! Acessories as well.
Haruka this is a very feminine photo of you, I'm enjoying the curvature in your neck its a very cute pose like you are subtly trying to make your hair the main focus of the photo. Your pose also helps to give definition to the angles around your neck and face adding some extra model points. Your skin looks soft (have you been using the shampoo on your skin as well) and of course your hair looks nice and bouncy. I would have liked to see more power and less shyness from you however, perhaps a stronger eye connection with the camera.
Morgan: From first appearance Agyness's photo looks familiar to me and then I realise that this photo looks like an advertisement for a pop TV show with a Agyness portraying a semi-alternative teenage girl. Although you look well styled, this photo is too safe and elementary for me. Some more sophistication and perhaps a wider shot where I could see some more of your posing would make this more effective for me.
Tilda, I appreciate the risk but this has not won me over. There are too many concerning elements in this photo for me to enjoy the overall execution. Your hair looks like a extremely conservative 50 year old mans hairstyle and from your shoulders upwards it looks like you have also stole a 50 year old's body characteristics. With a more modelesque execution the robotic mouth may have worked, but in its current form it appears messy. Fashion wise great! Acessories as well.
Haruka this is a very feminine photo of you, I'm enjoying the curvature in your neck its a very cute pose like you are subtly trying to make your hair the main focus of the photo. Your pose also helps to give definition to the angles around your neck and face adding some extra model points. Your skin looks soft (have you been using the shampoo on your skin as well) and of course your hair looks nice and bouncy. I would have liked to see more power and less shyness from you however, perhaps a stronger eye connection with the camera.
Lotus:
David:
Lindsay:
Rapunzel:
David:
Lindsay:
Rapunzel:
Janice: I think this one works nicely as a cologne advertisement. A lot of men's cologne is emphasised by sex appeal and water, I find, such as this one here:
(Which you could've used by the way), but this works in a different way than the example I just posted, whereas that one implies a strong, masculine scent, the one you posted implies a soft, androgynous scent. It's a different market, and it applies to women too! To nitpick though, I don't like the lighting.
I wish the handbag were a little more prominent in Lindsay's picture possibly even white while Lindsay is in a darker colour, like black or red. The face is the main part of my qualm here though. It's very vacant.
And Jessica ... I mean Rapunzel, you've got a lot of hair, but I feel a little let down by this, to be quite frank. Since you have all that hair, I was expecting something with the hair in its near entirety, like this:
Instead, I feel an advertisement which is trying hard to be sexy. I can't really see it as a haircare advertisement.
C. Viper: David, you kill me with sexiness. It's a really nice shot of you and I can easily see it as a fragrance ad, so you've done well. If I had to criticize, I'd say that I'm not completely fond of the filter used on the photo. Makes to quality of lighting look a little off when it's probably just the filter added to the shot.
Lindsey, if I didn't know who was on your team and was asked to guess which of the three models in the shot was on the team, I'd go with the guy on the right. Due to the staging and the intense stare he's giving the camera, he looks like the primary focus of the shot. That said, I do like your purse and how it plays off of your outfit. Although, I'm not totally fond of your styling and expression here. You look a little like a mess.
Rapunzel, of course you have a fantastic hair product shot. It looks so healthy and beautiful here, with a nice sheen to it. It's definitely the first thing I notice, but you still look nice in the rest of your shot. Your eyes are wonderful and the pose is really nice and helps draw attention to your hair.
Morgan: Echo! More like Marco Polo, if I were flailing around in water I would definately want to come into contact with your chisled face. It looks like you are literally just soaking up that cologne as well as your sexiness and enticing the viewer to come join you. Well you don't have to ask Morgan twice!
Do you think that bathtub can handle the both of us?
Lindsay where is your purse! Are you sure that your accessories aren't those two beasts by your side? You look gorgeous here, definitely the type of girl and beauty that Morgan appreciates however your accessory isn't well pronounced for me. Perhaps a different colour would have made your accessory stand out more.
This is a winner winner for me Rapunzel. I actually prefer your submitted photo over the cartoony one Janice DICK-IN-SON posted. I think you look elegant, with a hint of sexy and incredibly soft. The way in which you are playing with your hair draws attention to your lucious locks, as does your eyes. Your gaze seems to ask the view to inquire about your beauty.
Team Stingy:
Wen:
Miley:
Sanji:
Wen:
Miley:
Sanji:
Janice: I'm going to put this out there right now, as a whole package this week, I think you've killed it.
First, Wen advertisement, while I think it's the weakest of the three, I can still definitely see it working very well as a perfume advertisement. The styling here is amazing, and I can definitely imagine how nice it would smell.
Miley's surprisingly, I think is the strongest. There's a lot of similar colours, and a lot of accessories, but it all comes together so nicely. This is the Miley I want to see. A classy modern Miley, rather than a trashy one.
Sanji, stunning profile, and I love how you're modelling with the body here, not just the face. The face gives it an extra bit of angst, and I think that works very well for a male haircare advertisement.
All around, a good job.
C. Viper: Wen, I love how the action of the shot ties in with the name of the fragrance. It's not my favorite shot of you as it kinda looks like a runway shot of your model rather than an actual modeling shot. Still, the styling is nice and the action compliments your fragrance.
Miley, this could possibly be a mascara ad, but the accessorizing is great and definitely works as a jewelry ad. I like how this shot is monochrome, but we can still see everything clearly. The pose is nice, if not a bit simple, but at all comes together for a solid ad.
Sanji, I love this shot of you Your hair looks so great that I'm jealous here. It's a great profile shot, which I feel is one of the best angles for a hair care ad. There's nothing about this photo I don't like (other than your eyebrows, which I said I won't hold against you).
Morgan: I love how cultural you look here, like a Geisha after hours. You are giving us a strong semi-profile pose which works well for you. I love the styling and the cheeky pulling up of the dress. I think you have captured a scent which many people would desire to have.
Miley for someone who appears to naturally have little curves and angles you are working your body to the max. I love your broad shoulders and the delicious dip in your middle body. Your bracelets stand out more than your necklaces but I am digging the overall gold vibe. Although your eyes are mesmorising they are a little too squinty for my taste.
Sanji your hair looks exactly like Morgans after it has been shampooed, ice and soft and fluffy. This is a nice profile shot of you, I love the furrowing brow and the definition which is plastered all over your face. Your chiselled jaw, and even the tension in your neck works for you. I would say that your modelling out-powers the focus of your product here.
