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Post by Lotus on Oct 11, 2013 4:12:03 GMT -5
Cologne: Echo Fashion Accessory: Purse
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Oct 13, 2013 0:04:29 GMT -5
I think this one works nicely as a cologne advertisement. A lot of men's cologne is emphasised by sex appeal and water, I find, such as this one here: (Which you could've used by the way), but this works in a different way than the example I just posted, whereas that one implies a strong, masculine scent, the one you posted implies a soft, androgynous scent. It's a different market, and it applies to women too! To nitpick though, I don't like the lighting. I wish the handbag were a little more prominent in Lindsay's picture possibly even white while Lindsay is in a darker colour, like black or red. The face is the main part of my qualm here though. It's very vacant. And Jessica ... I mean Rapunzel, you've got a lot of hair, but I feel a little let down by this, to be quite frank. Since you have all that hair, I was expecting something with the hair in its near entirety, like this: Instead, I feel an advertisement which is trying hard to be sexy. I can't really see it as a haircare advertisement.
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Post by Hikaru Utada on Oct 13, 2013 0:06:01 GMT -5
David, you kill me with sexiness. It's a really nice shot of you and I can easily see it as a fragrance ad, so you've done well. If I had to criticize, I'd say that I'm not completely fond of the filter used on the photo. Makes to quality of lighting look a little off when it's probably just the filter added to the shot.
Lindsey, if I didn't know who was on your team and was asked to guess which of the three models in the shot was on the team, I'd go with the guy on the right. Due to the staging and the intense stare he's giving the camera, he looks like the primary focus of the shot. That said, I do like your purse and how it plays off of your outfit. Although, I'm not totally fond of your styling and expression here. You look a little like a mess.
Rapunzel, of course you have a fantastic hair product shot. It looks so healthy and beautiful here, with a nice sheen to it. It's definitely the first thing I notice, but you still look nice in the rest of your shot. Your eyes are wonderful and the pose is really nice and helps draw attention to your hair.
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Post by Morgan Freeman on Oct 13, 2013 1:21:00 GMT -5
Morgan: Echo! More like Marco Polo, if I were flailing around in water I would definately want to come into contact with your chisled face. It looks like you are literally just soaking up that cologne as well as your sexiness and enticing the viewer to come join you. Well you don't have to ask Morgan twice! Do you think that bathtub can handle the both of us? Lindsay where is your purse! Are you sure that your accessories aren't those two beasts by your side? You look gorgeous here, definitely the type of girl and beauty that Morgan appreciates however your accessory isn't well pronounced for me. Perhaps a different colour would have made your accessory stand out more. This is a winner winner for me Rapunzel. I actually prefer your submitted photo over the cartoony one Janice DICK-IN-SON posted. I think you look elegant, with a hint of sexy and incredibly soft. The way in which you are playing with your hair draws attention to your lucious locks, as does your eyes. Your gaze seems to ask the view to inquire about your beauty.
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