Post by Deleted on Oct 4, 2013 0:05:07 GMT -5
This week, we went back to how do you say, High School? With your favourite foreign exchange student, Saison Marguerite.
Brazilian Wizards:
Rodrigo: Drama Club
Rodrigo: Drama Club
Morgan: Either you are a good dancer or everyone around you is kinaesthetically inept because you look the best in this photo! Even with all that chaotic dancing going on you stand out. It looks like you are strumming your dance partner like a guitar and by the look on your face you like that feeling! You have given us a strong pose in the midst of your dancing action which shows us you have skills in action shots. Idealistically I would have liked the scene to be a little less busy but it helps to reinforce your high school stereotype. Honestly though you look a too old for high school.
Saison: This picture is very, how do you say... dramatic? This reminds me of my high school drama class, very full of energy and how do you say, dancing? It is very musical theatre. Are you the teacher of this class? Or a mature age student? For me, this is very strong and how do you say, vibrant? but perhaps I would like to see more, how you say, energy.
C. Viper: This is probably the best photo of a man we've seen this season. I can see this as an ensemble shot for a musical and it's great that while you have a lot of people in the shot, you've kept yourself as the obvious star. The pose is great, but if I had to nitpick here, I would have preferred your eyes to be open here.
Saison: This picture is very, how do you say... dramatic? This reminds me of my high school drama class, very full of energy and how do you say, dancing? It is very musical theatre. Are you the teacher of this class? Or a mature age student? For me, this is very strong and how do you say, vibrant? but perhaps I would like to see more, how you say, energy.
C. Viper: This is probably the best photo of a man we've seen this season. I can see this as an ensemble shot for a musical and it's great that while you have a lot of people in the shot, you've kept yourself as the obvious star. The pose is great, but if I had to nitpick here, I would have preferred your eyes to be open here.
Team Fire:
Lily: Goth Chick
Lily: Goth Chick
Morgan: What kind of Goth sits in the sunlight in a tanning chair! You are a confused child. You have pulled off the Goth image here, very convincing with your heavy boots, and assorted black attire. Maintaining your hair as its natural colour gives you a unique look which works well for you. You should take a leaf out of Marilyn's book because he has got some serious modelling going on in his face whereas you look a little blank perhaps blinded by the sun. I do like how you look like the Goth gang leader, with a little minion accessorising for you. Bringing some more power, dominance and authority to this photo would have helped create this image.
Saison: The quality is, how you say, not good. Generally, people do not like to see a lot of text on a submission. I like the how you say, fashion, but the quality is very, very bad. If you, how you say, paste the image url into google, you can search by image to find a bigger or better how you say, picture?
Like this one here:
But Saison would like to see some more, how you say, energy.
C. Viper: As has already been covered, there was a better version of this shot out there. One without the text and one with a better size. That said, your clique is easy to see here. The setting doesn't make the most sense to me, but the styling is right. Marilyn is stealing a bit of your focus here, but you're still the central focus of the shot. You also look like you're 13 here, for some reason.
Saison: The quality is, how you say, not good. Generally, people do not like to see a lot of text on a submission. I like the how you say, fashion, but the quality is very, very bad. If you, how you say, paste the image url into google, you can search by image to find a bigger or better how you say, picture?
Like this one here:
But Saison would like to see some more, how you say, energy.
C. Viper: As has already been covered, there was a better version of this shot out there. One without the text and one with a better size. That said, your clique is easy to see here. The setting doesn't make the most sense to me, but the styling is right. Marilyn is stealing a bit of your focus here, but you're still the central focus of the shot. You also look like you're 13 here, for some reason.
Legally Blonde:
Agyness: How you say, Muso.
Morgan: I'm glad you gave us a description of an alternative way of conceptualising the band kids stereotype. This is an interesting photo I like the way in which your body is portraying a range of emotions, I'm sensing an element of self-consciousness, drive and determination in your eyes, the hunching of your body and the kink in your leg. I would have like to see you lengthening out your body rather than pulling it together however it does appear to work here. You are making mesmorising eye contact with the camera and I like the way you have (purposefully) stolen your drummers spotlight with your hands, that's my girl! You take charge of the spotlight!
Saison: I remember seeing girls like this around Overland Park High. They are usually very, how do say, unpopular. Agyness looks like them, oui. Even though she is, how you say, hunched, she looks very tall. Your drummer friend looks like he's having a break though. And I would like to see more, how you say, energy.
C. Viper: It's not the band geek in the sense I would normally think of, but your description does a great job explaining what you're going for and it's a good fit. I love your legs in this shot. You may be hunched over, but at least we still get to see some good length coming from your lower body. I love the makeup job; it fits with your styling well. Your hair is pretty wonderful here, too. Love how defined the look is and makes me feel like I can hear the music that you would be playing.
Saison: I remember seeing girls like this around Overland Park High. They are usually very, how do say, unpopular. Agyness looks like them, oui. Even though she is, how you say, hunched, she looks very tall. Your drummer friend looks like he's having a break though. And I would like to see more, how you say, energy.
C. Viper: It's not the band geek in the sense I would normally think of, but your description does a great job explaining what you're going for and it's a good fit. I love your legs in this shot. You may be hunched over, but at least we still get to see some good length coming from your lower body. I love the makeup job; it fits with your styling well. Your hair is pretty wonderful here, too. Love how defined the look is and makes me feel like I can hear the music that you would be playing.
Lotus:
Rapunzel: Punk Chick
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Rapunzel: Punk Chick
Saison: I don't know about this. It fits the theme, oui, but I don't know about how well it is, how you say, executed. I see girls like this all around school, and she looks like the unpopular girls around Overland Park, especially this one girl called Rachel Tice. She is very, how you say, unpopular. I agree with Morgan, I would like to see, how you say, more. And I would like to see more how you say, energy.
Team Stingy:
Miley: Punk
Miley: Punk
Morgan: Normally I'm not into punk women I prefer PIN UP GIRLS, but this photo has got Morgan's motor revving. You definitely haven't held back with the styling in this photo and it has mostly worked out well for you. I like the cutting edge fashion and the androgyny that your pose and styling bring. Of course I appreciate the lack of bra and the cheeky peep of the boobies coming from under your shirt (did you really think that I wouldn't mention that?) The choker that you have around your neck steals your neck and makes your head look a little plump. Your face is very clear in this shot, strong complexion and your facial definitions are prominent.
Saison: Where is Miley's, how you say, neck? She is very close to having a, how you say, nipp slip. I like the fashion in this photo, oui. Morgan is correct, you have a strong face here. But there's nothing connecting it to your body. Also, I would like to see more, how do you say, energy?
C. Viper: I love the styling here; it fits so well with your clique. I'm not a fan of the shirt, though. It's a little too trashy, for me. A little underboob doesn't bother me if it's done in a tasteful way, but I don't feel it's done with an artistic statement here, so that's where my problem comes from it. Your makeup is great and the hair is a nice touch, too (definitely better than your VMA hairstyle). I would have preferred a little neck here, too. Still, a solid effort this round.
Saison: Where is Miley's, how you say, neck? She is very close to having a, how you say, nipp slip. I like the fashion in this photo, oui. Morgan is correct, you have a strong face here. But there's nothing connecting it to your body. Also, I would like to see more, how do you say, energy?
C. Viper: I love the styling here; it fits so well with your clique. I'm not a fan of the shirt, though. It's a little too trashy, for me. A little underboob doesn't bother me if it's done in a tasteful way, but I don't feel it's done with an artistic statement here, so that's where my problem comes from it. Your makeup is great and the hair is a nice touch, too (definitely better than your VMA hairstyle). I would have preferred a little neck here, too. Still, a solid effort this round.
Sun Kissed :
Kate: Fag Hag
Kate: Fag Hag
Saison: I think you look caught in the action, oui. But why are you eating Chinese food? You should be eating some how do you say, delicious French food like baguettes and how you say, crepes! You have accurate display to your clique, it's what Morgan looks like in real life when Janice gets a, how you say, boyfriend. Morgan in real life is a, how you say, fag hag. However, fashion and modelling values are lacking. And I would like to see more, how you say, energie.
Morgan: Real life Morgan certainly is a fag hag! IT'S NOT MY FAULT THAT I AM IRREVOCABLY DRAWN TO THEIR GENTLE YET SEXUAL NATURE! Anyway.
You look like a natural pretty girl here who is genuinely enjoying a dinner date with your fellow hunky sidekicks. I appreciate your wide smile and I can sense a hint of modelling going on with your legs (a potential pointing of the feet and stretching of the legs) but unfortunately the photo cuts off before this is revealed. Although you look caught up in the moment it has resulted in you appearing not so model-like or fashionable as we would have preferred.
C. Viper: To me, the clique isn't as clear here as it could be. I can see it with some prompting, but there's not much about the shot itself to make me think that it's a girl hanging out with her gay pals. It's also looking a bit candid here. Possibly like it's just a screenshot of you, more than anything. I do love the energy you're giving us here and you've chosen what my favorite clique is, but I wish the execution was just a bit better.
Morgan: Real life Morgan certainly is a fag hag! IT'S NOT MY FAULT THAT I AM IRREVOCABLY DRAWN TO THEIR GENTLE YET SEXUAL NATURE! Anyway.
You look like a natural pretty girl here who is genuinely enjoying a dinner date with your fellow hunky sidekicks. I appreciate your wide smile and I can sense a hint of modelling going on with your legs (a potential pointing of the feet and stretching of the legs) but unfortunately the photo cuts off before this is revealed. Although you look caught up in the moment it has resulted in you appearing not so model-like or fashionable as we would have preferred.
C. Viper: To me, the clique isn't as clear here as it could be. I can see it with some prompting, but there's not much about the shot itself to make me think that it's a girl hanging out with her gay pals. It's also looking a bit candid here. Possibly like it's just a screenshot of you, more than anything. I do love the energy you're giving us here and you've chosen what my favorite clique is, but I wish the execution was just a bit better.
