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Post by Emma Frost on Aug 4, 2013 10:11:26 GMT -5
Ultima Ice Perfume
Ultima Ice Lipstick |
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Aug 4, 2013 11:22:15 GMT -5
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Post by Emma Frost on Aug 4, 2013 16:17:32 GMT -5
i'm sorry i'm really sick i thought i had but i was just too sick to check back. i'll have to submit later, been in bed most the day
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Post by Emma Frost on Aug 4, 2013 19:49:10 GMT -5
Are hats an accessory? I' sorry I'm so sick
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Aug 5, 2013 0:08:39 GMT -5
I'd classify them more as clothing than an accessory...
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Post by Emma Frost on Aug 5, 2013 13:41:51 GMT -5
Sorry, I was really sick all weekend with diarrhea and stomach issues (sorry to say the gross d word but I'm just stressing how sick i was) I slept most of yesterday. It's just been horrible. I'm sorry for all my mistakes and I'm also sorry I didn't know we'd get penalties for accidentally submitting a repeat or I would have foudn some time to research because it looked familiar but was too sick to go through and look.
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Post by Emma Frost on Aug 5, 2013 13:43:21 GMT -5
Can you link me to the post about penalties please........I seriously dont' remember seeing it and wondering what post it was in and why I didn't see it.
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Aug 6, 2013 4:43:43 GMT -5
Psylocke and Ezio have received penalties in the past for reusing photos.
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Aug 6, 2013 4:48:29 GMT -5
It's only one point penalty at this stage in the competition. It probably won't do much.
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Post by All-Class on Aug 7, 2013 5:33:34 GMT -5
I really like that you have been creative with choosing perfume as your cosmetic and taking advantage of your " diamond " sheen to sell it. The pose is absolutely perfect, but there is something a bit off with your face. Your other commercial is ok, but the product seems a bit lost on your poster and the taglines on both leave something to be desired.
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Aug 7, 2013 5:44:30 GMT -5
Bella, I'm responsible for the tagline if the contestant doesn't submit one.
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Post by All-Class on Aug 7, 2013 23:12:46 GMT -5
My apologies Queen Fyora, I meant no offence, za woka geneva!
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Aug 8, 2013 3:11:28 GMT -5
Yeah, you better apologise, or I'll take the ladder from your pool.
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Aug 9, 2013 6:56:08 GMT -5
Okay, enough threatening Bella, it's time for my critique. First, your perfume. A cool, fresh and icy scent is definitely what I see here. I also see it's a bit... cold in here, Emma. I mean, I can see a couple of friends saying hello on your chest. I think it works well for a perfume advertisement.
However, I can't say I say the same about your lipstick. I believe the focus is too much on the psychic aura around your head. It's also very mean looking. We don't want a lipstick that will make us be seen as mean, Emma. If I crop off the top, it looks much better.
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Post by Hikaru Utada on Aug 10, 2013 1:05:50 GMT -5
You have some nice product placement in that first shot and since perfume is something we can't literally see, it has to be a good feeling about the shot and I do get the vibe of a perfume ad from it. You have a great pose, I love the vibe of the shot.
I'm not as wild about your second shot. Your lips definitely pop in a really nice way here, but your eyes are a problem for me. They look far too angry for an ad like this and it's a little distracting.
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