Photoshoot #1 - Triad

[Makoto Kino]

So... I don't really know how you want photoshoots to be done, I usually post 4-6 photos of possibilities and then select one in the next post. If you don't like this then next photoshoot I will adhere to your wishes.

Model - POTENTIAL

Yulia is f*ing gorgeous



Nice model-like face, maybe awkward arm placement, not full body, water and music notes distract (?)



I would love to walk in to my apartment, with Yulia sitting like this. Sly smile, but no color. More of a full body, and a good model pose



Model pose+ full body+, lingerie-esque, maybe this is better for Pin Up photo?



Playful pose, Like a 17 Mag girl cover photo,



Love the arms and hair, maybe not model-like in the face, too smily, legs are absent



Yulia makes me drool. Model face? Kinda weird though - wouldn't want to kiss her looking like that, oh never mind yes I would, arm placement decent, no legs :/



Celebrity - SMILE

This was hard. Katie is more of a sinister, sensual person in her photos. It's harder to find ones of her smiling. Of some 500 photos in her gallery, only like 20 were smiling.



Nice smile, genuine, lacks a little bedazzle/spark/something extra



Good smile, nice hair, but is the smile the focal point of this picture? the bed, necklace, and hands are distracting.



Wonderful smile, but not in color. I don't know how much color is important in this shoot.


Cartoon - BEAUTY



Beautiful, elegant, face too small?



face close up, but body? and decent, but not WOW hott damn



beautiful, playful,



Beautiful, realistic, is that a tongue sticking out?



School girl uniform... too immature? Nice body shot, but doesn't scream beautiful.

[Makoto Kino]

My selected photos:



I really liked the black and white photo, but reading over Lesson 1, the model should be in high fashion. I think that this dress shows a glimpse of high fashion and I love the arm placement and hair in this photo.



Okay, although this photo lacks a little something, it's still a nice photo of Katie smiling. It might connect an emotional bond for some of the clients to buy a product. Idk.



Although her tongue is sticking out or something is happening around her mouth, this captures <<beauty>> more than the other photos. She looks pretty hott and more than just a cartoon.

[Janice Dickinson]

Janice: Yulia truly is a beauty, and we can see that is your main focal point in your potential photograph. It would have been great to see your legs.

Katie's smile is beautiful and inviting. It's approachable and inviting. It's perfect for a campaign for a cosmetic product and shows your potential at being a spokesperson.

Mako, your photo isn't a beauty shot. As specified in the shoot instructions, a beauty shot is a photograph of the face. Which means only one of your five example photos is a beauty shot. I suggest trying deviantart to find better artwork, and searching under Makoto rather than Lita.

[Makoto Kino]

Oh shoot

Can I change Makoto's photo ?

[Janice Dickinson]

Once you submit a photo, you cannot change it.

[Makoto Kino]

drat i hope i survive

[Morgan Freeman]

Morgan:
Yulia - So hot, want to touch the hiney! This girl looks gorgeous, high class, cheeky and yet sweet. I adore the dimple in your cheek and the connection you are making with the camera. I would have liked to see the rest of your body but perhaps that's just Morgan Junior talking.
Katie - Okay I'm going to have to be honest here, this photo scares me. It looks like a before shot from a skin commercial ad or a wanted photo of a manic woman who is loose in a village. I can see that you are in fact beautiful from the alternative photos that you posted but this photo does not scream beautiful for me it just makes me scream in general.
Mako - You are very cute and I love your emerald eyes and your puffy hair, I think this photo as a close up would have been great in itself however as Janice mentioned this isn't a beauty shot.

[Makoto Kino]

listening to the comments



Want a photo:



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me until like noon on friday:




me at 2 hours before deadline:

[Toadette]

Toadette:
Yulia, I do like this. I think that your connection with the camera is strong, but I would like to see your legs. Overall, I still think you have potential here.

Katie, I don't really like this. It's just a tad too dark for smiling. Sorry!

Mako, I actually really like this photo, but feel as though I have to rank it low because it doesn't fit within the guidelines for the shot. I still do like it though! I see where your mind was at when I look at it.

[Makoto Kino]

Holy shit.... Bottom 2. Am I out of my league here?