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Post by Ebony Souls on Mar 17, 2016 18:18:27 GMT -5
Jourdan for Volumizing Shampoo   Alicia for Hairspray   Kida for Leave-in Conditioner   As a note, I loved Alicia's so much I didn't try and edit out her name or the word "Karma". Instead, I'd like the products to all be named Karma and have Jourdan and Kida's names just like Alicia's. I would do it myself but I don't have a reliable font editing program and I'm using a Chromebook for my needs, and downloading anything is next to impossible. Having Kida's full name: Kidagakash Nedakh would be preferable if you want to take the time. Thanks <3 |
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Post by Team Marvellous on Mar 17, 2016 19:11:56 GMT -5
i have some font on my computer I could try and help
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Mar 18, 2016 3:51:23 GMT -5
Holy shit, Eric. I'm not that talented.
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Mar 18, 2016 5:01:41 GMT -5
Don't forget the reward picture. It shouldn't be pretty easy with Kida.
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Mar 18, 2016 8:45:22 GMT -5
Bitch better appreciate my work. I've been spending the last 6 hours on this.
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Post by Ebony Souls on Mar 18, 2016 12:26:17 GMT -5
Lol oops. Reward picture. If there was an extension on that I can do it after I get home from work at 4pm est.
I always appreciate the work! You are amazing!
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Post by Ebony Souls on Mar 18, 2016 12:27:38 GMT -5
THEY ARE SO PERFECT!!!!
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Mar 19, 2016 6:03:11 GMT -5
Go ahead and post the reward, we won't be finishing the panel any time soon. I'm working on the other ads.
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Post by Emma Frost on Mar 20, 2016 9:08:01 GMT -5
Wow, fucking Jourdan and Alicia's are perfect. Jourdan, that hair! OMFG that hair!! It's beautiful and amazing and just perfect for the product. And Jourdan looks AMAZING!!! Alicia, wow, just wow. I love this, and a fucking profile at that? Perfect hair, perfect profile, perfect photo. You just nailed this theme head on. Kida's is my least favourite but it's still good tho. Beautiful, although I wish I could see more of the hair for a hair product, but it's a good picture. Great job!!!
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Mar 20, 2016 9:20:36 GMT -5
The less editing I have to do, the better. In your case, a lot of cropping had to be done. The task of hair is not the easiest theme to get, but I think you nailed it.
Just nitpicking with Jourdan. Her hair is perfect, but the eyes read as dead to me, rather than intensity.
You had absolutely no idea what I had to go through to work with that "Karma" text, and what I had to do to single it out. It worked in the end, but it wasn't the most ideal thing to work with, and in any other shoot, you'd be losing a few marks for that.
As for Kida, I know you originally edited out her face markings, but this is Kida, and a part of her. It what makes her stand out, and recognisable from the other black woman with white hair and blue eyes (Aka Storm). The art style does make her face look flat here, the markings bring focus away from that.
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Post by Ebony Souls on Mar 20, 2016 11:38:05 GMT -5
I totally understand with Kida. I was highly annoyed by how large the markings were but loved the way her hair was styled because it wasn't squared off. I guess I could have kept one of them, it was just irritating me. I'm glad you put them back in now.
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Post by Hikaru Utada on Mar 20, 2016 11:41:57 GMT -5
Jourdan, I love how well you're selling the product. You've definitely chosen the right product to compliment this shot. I do agree with Janice that your eyes are a bit bothersome, though.
Alicia, like Emma, I love the profile work here. Before reading the descriptions of the products, I tried to guess what each shot was selling and I came very close on this shot, so definitely hit the theme very well.
Kida, your hair is beautiful and I can see you effectively selling your product. I am judging these based off of what you submitted rather than Janice's edits, so I have to comment on the lack of your facial markings. I wouldn't ask Winnie from Lionheart to edit her skin because that's who she is and embracing it makes it a strength in her uniqueness, which is the same for Kida.
Overall, I want to say that I appreciate that you gave of three shots from three different angles. We have the straight-forward shot, the 3/4, and the profile. Nice that you gave us variety this round while still keeping the products in mind.
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