Seven Lucky Gods

[Team Marvellous]

So I drew something this round and as Jurojin. the God of knowledge. I feel there are many lessons to learn from books and the pictures and fantasy they paint in our minds.we get lost in those worlds. I decided to modernize Alice designing a fascinator for her and putting her in a star covered jumper. Also Jurojin is all about youth and longevity both things I feel Alice exemplifies quite well

[Janice Dickinson]

I appreciate the amount of time and effort you put into this picture, and your a good artist. But I have to treat this like everyone else's, so I hope you understand.

The first thing I would say is that this should have been scanned in. The flash makes the stars the "star" of the picture, rather than Alice. I also think you need to work on shading and contouring the face. It looks pretty flat and featureless. The fascinator is to die for, but the dress looks like grandma's dressing gown. I see aspects of Jurojin in it, and you fit the theme.

[Team Marvellous]

i broke the glass on my scanner anyway thanks and I had fun drawing.ill try and use photos i find in the feature

[Janice Dickinson]

Someone needs a new scanner!

[Hikaru Utada]

I'm not sure we've had someone draw their own image before. I definitely appreciate the amount of effort you've put into your shot this round. The posing ties in well with your theme, but the stars are a bit distracting and I don't think you needed all those words to get the theme across. I agree with Janice that your shading and contouring could stand to be stronger to help flesh out the picture more. Still, I really do appreciate the level of effort you've put into this round and it's a hell of a lot better than anything I could hope to draw.

[Team Marvellous]

thanks you

[Emma Frost]

The photo is gorgeous and you did an awesome job. The writing a bit much, too much sorry there, but otherwise, very good job.