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Post by Three Amigos on Feb 20, 2016 6:37:36 GMT -5
He is trying to sold Scarf.
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Feb 21, 2016 4:49:05 GMT -5
We're not going to dock points for what we thought you should have submitted, but I think we're all pretty disappointed we won't see some Jon K Butt this round (Well, a majority of us).
On this picture itself, I'm not sure if there is a bigger version of this picture, but if there is, I think it would have greatly benefitted from a cropping. Just the lower half to bring focus to the scarf and give the illusion of nudity. You're also missing your neck here. Even though you're wearing a scarf, it's still important to make it look like you're showing off your neck. Currently you're hunched over, and a bit like a turtle and its shell.
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Post by Hikaru Utada on Feb 21, 2016 5:04:26 GMT -5
I want some Jon K ASS!!!
Studio shots tend to be risky choices; they can come across as less impactful than shots with background/scenery. Sometimes they work out, but I'm afraid this is one of those times when it doesn't quite do it for me. I'll start off with some positives, though. I love the disheveled look on men and your hair if meeting that look perfectly. I'm also getting some nice intensity from your eyes.
But I don't like your posing and it's not enough to make me buy that hideous scarf. I'm not saying that no one should wear that scarf. I'm saying that no one should sleep with a man who willingly wears that scarf.
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Feb 21, 2016 5:12:56 GMT -5
Are you telling me, Hel, that you wouldn't want to sleep with Jon Kortajarena?
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Post by Three Amigos on Feb 21, 2016 10:26:33 GMT -5
I though this shot is sexy enough abd we are selling items and with Jon holding that scarf and showing it into camera for us I though it will match the most. I know it is not his best sexy shot but this wasnt just about being sexy.
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Post by Hikaru Utada on Feb 21, 2016 12:47:41 GMT -5
Ok, I'm breaking character just to straight talk. For me, I think what's being docked more here is the lack of production quality. This looks more like a photo from a Go-See than an actual shoot. It's showing your potential to do well with the shoot if you book the gig. I would have preferred something more like his shot. Could have been selling watches with that shot. While not a perfect score, it has more of a professional vibe to it. Not the sexiest picture of him, either, but it is about his sex appeal being used to sell the product itself. I understand what you were going for; it just wound up not resinating with me this round.
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Post by Morgan Freeman on Feb 21, 2016 18:41:42 GMT -5
I like your face in this shot and the action vibe that you have brought to the picture, the scarf itself is not something that should ever be sold though! Because there is action in this shot I would have preferred it to be full length so that your modelling and posing in your legs would fit with the rest of your body. I don't mind the photo personally but it does have an impression of a young model who hasn't yet developed complete confidence.
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