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Post by Janice Dickinson on Mar 14, 2016 6:00:19 GMT -5
Let's start with a few negatives - I don't like the black and white, it's robbing from those clothes, and would make you stand out more, also the cropping or the fact it's a studio shot - Which makes it less believable as a "random" act of modelling. Your face is damn hot though, the lighting is doing wonders to that face.
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Post by Hikaru Utada on Mar 14, 2016 13:16:16 GMT -5
The fact that it's black and white is only a minor problem for me. I do think it'd be stronger in color, but it's still a great look. I love how you're trying to look tough, but that dog is showing the sweetest face ever; the dog's sweetness betrays you. I don't really mind that it's a studio shot since this is one of those things that you don't need a setting to show you're doing an every day activity. Yeah, it'd be better if you did have a setting, but it's not something I'm really going to get hung up about. Oh, and the fashion itself is great.
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Post by Emma Frost on Mar 15, 2016 9:45:40 GMT -5
Yes, studio shot ruins the impact of an every day thing but I like this. You look fierce. Good job. Good comeback
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Post by Tier 1 on Mar 18, 2016 7:38:05 GMT -5
Photoshoot #8 - Ultima cosmetics Sean O'Pry   Since I'm showing a nice portion of the body, I was thinking along the lines of a body wash. "Irresistibly clean". If a body wash doesn't count then we can do something about styling gel but then I'd want this photo used: i.imgur.com/mt54let.png. "For that perfect messy look". Miguel Angel Silvestre   Since we're in the shower, I guess shampoo. This one at least has some modeling components. Squall Leonhart   I AM PANICKING. I AM LATE FOR WORK. I CHANGED TO THIS ONE BECAUSE JANICE MADE ME PANICK. I WANTED TO SAVE THIS ONE FOR A 'PIN UP'. AND I NEED TO LEAVE. IDEALLY I WAS GOING TO MAKE SQUALL DO AN AFTER SHAVE BUT NOW I DON"T KNOW WHAT PRODUCT WOULD WORK BEST FOR ALL THIS MUSCLE. UH. I GUESS WE COULD DO A RAZOR? IDK. HIS FACE IS OBVIOUSLY CLEAN SHAVEN AND WE COULD HINT AT MULTI PURPSE SHAVING (MANSCAPING) IDK BUT I NEED TO GO. |
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Post by Tier 1 on Mar 18, 2016 7:38:26 GMT -5
I CAN"T SUBMIT FOR A REWARD. NEED TO LEAVE. SORRY.
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Mar 18, 2016 7:43:40 GMT -5
To be fair, you could've for an extension asked too.
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Mar 18, 2016 21:40:23 GMT -5
It's going to take me a while to make all of these ads and I'm still unsure what Squall's is. So, when you're more calm, please clarify.
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Post by Tier 1 on Mar 18, 2016 23:21:27 GMT -5
Hi... I'm calm now lol. Can we have Squall be a men's lotion? Like smooth/soft skin. That's a grooming product right?
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Mar 19, 2016 0:25:02 GMT -5
What? Is it a body lotion? Are you sure not aftershave or cologne like you originally wanted?
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Post by Tier 1 on Mar 19, 2016 1:31:21 GMT -5
Oh let's totally do cologne. I thought you said that that wouldn't count for some reason.
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Mar 19, 2016 1:40:08 GMT -5
I said male grooming product. Do you use an aftershave or cologne to finish grooming? I know I do.
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Mar 20, 2016 0:06:48 GMT -5
I took the liberty of putting actual nipples on Squall, coz the brown dots were concerning me.
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Post by Tier 1 on Mar 20, 2016 8:14:51 GMT -5
You are really good at photoshop o.O
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Post by Emma Frost on Mar 20, 2016 9:13:08 GMT -5
I love Sean's. He looks irresistible and clean. Works wonderfully. Miguel, not my favourite looking guy of the bunch, but that's not your fault. He doesn't have to be attractive, just needs to model and he's doing a good job here. I do like this. Squall, this is fantastic, my favourite of the bunch, and glad for the nipples lol great job on this one.
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Mar 20, 2016 9:29:55 GMT -5
Truthfully, I left your ads to finish last. I didn't know what angle I was going to take with them. Women's cosmetic ads and men's grooming ads look different.
The main issue I'm having with Sean and Miguel's is that you wanted them to be ads for body wash and shampoo, etc. However, there's one crucial thing missing in those that other ads have: Soap. Foam. I worked with what I had to make a great finished product on both, but I don't know about them being ads for bathing products.
As for Squall, I took the liberty of adding nipples. The original picture just had icky brown dots that reminded me too much of cancerous melanoma. As for it being a scent, I feel it's reminiscent of Sean's sex sell's ad, which obviously got you first callout. It is missing the tiny bit of oomph Sean's one had though.
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