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Post by Heart Attack on Jan 6, 2014 4:39:58 GMT -5
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Post by Morgan Freeman on Jan 7, 2014 4:08:11 GMT -5
Sui He: It's clear that you are owning the product, your icy queen eye-shadow is unmistakeable and eye catching. I don't think the colour is entirely flattering on you however, you look like you are styled to hit a rave party which lowers your modelling appeal. Your gentle persona and flawless face help to counteract the styling setbacks though.
Jennifer: Are you a closet Cullen? Your eyes look captivating and shiny without looking forced as well. You have a natural effortless beauty but I would like to see more of a modelling effort here. You look a little bored as if you are fantasising about being anywhere but in the photoshoot. The shadow on the left side of your head isn't complimenting the photo in perhaps the desired way, find that light and seize it.
Boa: Do I see a Adams apple in my midst!? I sense a serious bump in that neck of yours. This photo is extremely versatile, I see a commercial for hair, accessories, lens, massacre which is your chosen product and you represent it well. Your eyelashes look lush, bold and full and I'm enjoying the little pout in your face. You seem to be making eye contact with something near the camera but not directly at the camera which would have been an added extra that may have created a stronger connection between you and the viewer.
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Week #8
Jan 7, 2014 12:57:27 GMT -5
Post by Hikaru Utada on Jan 7, 2014 12:57:27 GMT -5
Sui He, the product is clearly visible on you, so you definitely have that going. I'm not sure I like the overall cohesiveness of the shot, though. All of the individual elements alone work for me (except maybe your shirt, which feels cheap to me), but when put together, I don't like the way they mesh. Still, it's hard for me to pinpoint why, so it's probably not that big of a deal and probably won't really affect my scoring. I could see this used as an ad and you've shown the product off well.
Jennifer, despite your strong lips here, your eyes are definitely the first thing I noticed. For your product, I wish you would have gone with a bit more striking of a color, but that's just a personal preference. You do look a bit bored, but you also look really beautiful here. You're nicely styled and I love your hair this round You're giving us a different look this round, so I appreciate the variety.
Boa, I didn't notice that bump on your neck when I first saw this shot and that's because your eyes pull me straight to them. Yeah, it easily could have worked for a hair care ad, too, but your eyes are very strong here and this would work great for an ad. Literally the only negative I have here is the bump on your neck.
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Post by Janice Dickinson on Jan 8, 2014 2:09:16 GMT -5
I think this is probably the hardest assigned product for you of the other 3 feminine products. I'm going to start with Sui.
I see this more on the high end side of an eyeshadow commercial. Definitely a striking advertisement, would probably make me stop and look for a little bit. I'm not sold on the mouth. I think there's a certain aesthetic quality that's missing here. But I still think overall it works.
I must say, I'm very surprised to see circle lenses for Jennifer. The eyes are definitely the main focus despite the bold lip colour. But I do agree with Noel, I which the eye colour were something more striking. You could've edited the eye colour a bit in photoshop.
Finally, Boa. My cropping probably takes away from this, so I'm going to use your original. I don't see the Adam's apple that the other judges mentioned. I just see how stunning this picture is. I think it's quite beautiful. I think it would be better for basic beauty though... In fact, I think these two photos should be swapped. That one would be more a striking advertisement than this one I think.
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